P.S. As always, tell me what I should fix in it. Like if there seems to be too much talking.
“Three hundred men
from the Northern Reach, my lord!” A man shouted up at the newly crowned king
of Dagor. The army marched past.
“One hundred and
fifty from the Western mountains!”
“Five hundred from
the North-East caverns!”
Cedrik squirmed.
How many hours would this last?
“One thousand from
the Eastern Wild!”
He straightened.
That was the largest group yet.
“You know, Cedrik, you could at least
acknowledge the generals.” Ben whispered telepathically to him. Cedrik
jumped. “I’m not used to this, Ben. It’s
only the second day since I’ve become king. I’m glad that you’re my prime
advisor, or I’d get everything wrong.”
“Unfortunately, that is probably true.” Ben
smirked.
“Are you getting tired, Grere?” Cedrik
asked.
“Not really. But all this gathering is
getting on my nerves. Especially the nerves that tell me we need to do
something.”
“How many so far,
Sir…” Cedrik asked while looking over at the other dragon. Was it John?
“Jones, sire. And
there are…” He fiddled with his paper and pen. He looked up with dread in his
eyes. “Three thousand nine hundred.”
We’re not going to survive tonight. Cedrik
thought. He could see Grere shift his
head uncomfortably.
“We may not. But if we cannot survive, let
us make a last stand that is worthy of remembrance.” Greer growled.
“Ben, what about the country of Nahor? Would
they help us?”
“No, not if they could help it. Although,
there is a small chance…”
Cedrik
straightened. “What?”
“I was wondering if my friend in Nimunel’s
army was still alive.”
“Nimunel?”
“The country of moving islands. They would
help us. They fear us because they betrayed Dagor in the war between
continents.”
“Why would they help us, if they betrayed
us?”
“Because they swore an oath to help us when
the king of Dagor called, but they vanished along with their islands, when your
father called. They are somewhere out
there, in the sea. Going to the ends of the earth to avoid us.”
“How far is the ends of the earth?”
“I don’t know. They would be our only hope.
My friend was small in rank, but he may have advanced by now. He would help
Dagor.”
“I’m going. Now. Take over, you do better
than me at this ‘king’ stuff anyway.”
He smiled, and
turned to Jones.
“Jones? I’m calling for aid.”
“To who, sire?” he
asked suspiciously. He shifted in his seat.
“An old friend. He
would be our only hope now.” He looked to the east. The sea.
Grere landed and
Cedrik slid off. He ran to his room, which was now in the palace. He went to
the only empty corner, grabbed his sword and strapped it onto his shoulder.
After a second of hesitation, he picked up his new dagger that was worn by all
the previous kings of Dagor. He grimaced as he remembered that he had promised
Jones to wear it hidden wherever he went, as a protection from assassin
attempts.
He saw a bow and a
sheath of arrows on the wall, hanging. He reached up and pulled it down. He
didn’t know how to use these, but he’d have to learn eventually. He plucked the
bow string experimentally.
“Cedrik, hurry up! We don’t have that much
time to go and get back fast enough.” Grere interrupted.
“Sure. Hey, you don’t know how far it is!”
He took the sheath
of arrows, and put it over his shoulder.
“No. But at the rate you are taking to get
things, it will take forever!
“Are you hungry?”
“I can eat on the way.”
“What will you eat?
“Fish. Hurry up!”
He found his small
pack, filled it with dried meat and some gray bread that was the staple in
Dagor. What was it called? Oh yeah,
Kyitin.
He sprinted outside,
and found a dark green mound of scales on the cobblestone. “Grere,” he sighed,
“get up!”
Grere yawned. “I was just taking a nap. You were taking so
long.” He stumbled to his claws and Cedrik climbed up. “You really want to be prepared, don’t you?” He said as he craned
his neck and looked over Cedrik’s gear.
“Yeah, sure. Let’s get going already!”
He launched into
the clear cold air, and set his course for east, in general. Cedrik fell asleep
within two hours.
***
“Cedrik. Wake up.
I found something.”
Cedrik clawed at his eyes, forcing himself to wake up. When
he opened them, he saw
the ocean, and small desert island,
with a hill. It was moving towards them, against the current.
“What in Dagor is
that?”
“Possibly what we are
looking for.”
Grere landed on it, let Cedrik get
off, and collapsed to the ground. Cedrik set up camp for the night, while Grere
rested. Night came on A flash of lightning announced a coming downpour. Cedrik instinctively cringed. He started a
fire, and leaned against a rock.
“Cedrik.”
“What?”
“Don’t look, but there are a couple
people behind you. I saw them when the lightning flashed behind them.
The hairs on his neck stood up.
Suddenly there was a point in his back. It felt like an arrow.
“Stand up slowly,
and we might not kill you.” A young voice told him.
He stood up. Grere watched him.
“Oh, and if you
think your dragon can save you, think again. Turn around.”
He
turned around, and stepped back. “Come into the light.” He said questioningly,
not daring to move a muscle. A blonde haired girl about fourteen years old came
out of the brush, dressed like an agile archer complete with bow and dozens of
arrows. A boy Cedrik’s age came out of the sage brush, also dressed like an
archer.
“What
on earth are you doing here?” The boy asked. He was dressed in brown and tan,
probably meant to camouflage with the desert.
“I
could say the same for you two.”
“Silence!”
They
circled him, obviously checking for weapons. They in turn told him things like,
“Put down your sword,” or “give me your bow.” This went on for several minutes,
and Grere was just sitting in the same spot. Giving Cedrik advice, silently.
“Stare at them. Act bigger than you are, but
not that much. Make them fear you.”
“You know, if one of them wasn’t a
girl, I’d like you to roast them alive.”
“I would have already done so. You
want me to try roasting the boy?”
Cedrik looked at the arrows in
the bows. Just waiting to be fired.
“I don’t think that would be wise.”
There
seemed to be a signal that passed between the three, and the blonde girl
flipped up onto Grere’s neck, stretched her bow, and pointed it at Grere’s
head.
“One
wrong move and he is dead.” She said confidently.
“She’s gaining ground. Don’t let her have
it. She is the superior of the two. She cares
for the boy. The boy has a trigger finger. Use that to your advantage. Show
them what you’ve got. Use your blade Jones gave you.”
Cedrik
looked around coolly. In a quick moment, he dived to the ground, yanked out his
dagger from it’s boot sheath, flipped it around, all while rolling towards the
boy. He was dimly aware that the boy and girl were shooting arrow after arrow
into the sand, where he was less than a second ago. He leapt to his feet behind
the boy and put the sharp edge of his dagger in front of his neck.
“One
wrong move and he is dead.”
“Stalemate.
Very nicely played, kid.” The boy said.
“Show some respect
to your king!” Cedrik told him.
“King of what?
You’d have to be king of Dagor to be over us.”
Cedrik was about to
say, “I am,” but before he could, Grere told him not to. Save it for later, he said.
“Grere, she is looking at me. Use the advantage
before she focuses on you again.”
The green dragon’s
head snaked around to get her off his back. He succeeded, but only for half a second.
She jumped over the dragon’s neck and resumed her stance of getting ready to kill
him.
“Take me to your leader,
and I’ll let him go.”
She hesitated a couple
seconds, and said;
“Done.”
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